This is an interesting piece asking to carry the author back to the time when things were nice. The love between the two is very visible. The first smile, the butterflies in the stomach, the first time they held hands, the first kiss, the first love making are all chronicled. The ability to exist with just the other person is also very inspiring. The loved person is tired of the author's lies and being in love. All these points make the piece interesting and involving to read.
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