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Tweet Me A Story Entries  [18+]
140 character (or less) poems and stories including a few that actually won LOL
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Will Power" 
Review by Shaye
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon ,

I am Lorraine and I am reviewing your piece Will Power from Tweet Me A Story Entries  in affiliation with "Simply Positive Review Forum " .

Title: A short poem about having the will power to stick to your New Year's resolutions. You don't expressively say will power in the poem, so this slight variety is great, especially for a poem so short.

First Impression: Genres aren't something I usually comment on for book collections like this, but the genre of comedy is perfect, and an obvious choice. Especially for seemingly anything you write. You certainly know how to make person laugh, even in only 121 characters!

Rhyme: You've got a rhyme, even in something this short. The way it flows so easily from one line to the next seems to aid the comedic element of this poem. It flows well and then seems to stop dead at the end, just like anyone's New Year resolutions. *Laugh*

Word Choice: In a contest where the number of characters is everything, you need to choose your words wisely, and you have. Nothing seems too long, or too short for the poem. Each word in this short poem is important, and so each word is great.

Spelling/Grammar: No errors spotted here!

Closing Thoughts: Thanks for the very entertaining read! There are few writer's who could make me laugh at a poem of only four lines. To be honest, there are few people who can make me laugh out loud to something I read, but you seem to be one of them. Great job! *Bigsmile*

Lorraine

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