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 The Room  [E]
An attempt at flash fiction.
by MRamp
Review of The Room  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Balloonp* Welcome to WDC mramp! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


This story is quite fascinating and original. It hooked me from the start as it made me curious as the character to figure out where he was and why! *Thumbsup* It made me think of an asyllum or padded cell and someone with voices.

The conversation adds to the mystery especially as he could not speak and I kept wondering if the voice was in his head. The twist at the end is brilliant and so imaginative. I had to smile at the last line as they do not believe he would have thoughts etc and yet in his silent mode he does. So I wonder if he was actually was somehow real.

The setting was well described and the emotional tone of the character vivid. Pacing was good and the puntuation and dialogue served the story and drama.

Thanks for sharing your vision and creativity! *Starstruck* I had fun reading this.

Light on the path as you write on!
eyestar
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