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*Heart**Fairy*Hiya Raghav! This title popped up on random reads and the theme was intriguing. *Smile* I appreciate mythology and using Cupid as a main character to illustrate the theme of Outsourcing is brilliant.

I was thoroughly entertained by the lively dialogue between cupid and Venus. While I could hear his whining tone at first, I also got his enthusiasm when sharing this new idea for the solution! *Thumbsup*

I think "you're" would be better "You are" in "there you're, my dear Mom" near the end. In "Mom cupid said" You need to have quotes after Mom. eg. "Mom," said Cupid, "I.." in the 4th verse.

Having Cupid still active in the modern world is wonderful. I had to smile at love at the malls, facebook etc! *Laugh* The free flow suit the subject reads well aloud. I had so much fun reading entering into the vision. *Thumbsup*

Thanks for sharing this creative dialogue poem

Light on the path as you write on!!*Star*
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