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 Review #4289701 |
  Happy New year Robin!  I had great fun reading this bit of nonsense and really enjoyed the flow of interesting words and hilarious concepts like "fluent bird" and "subterranean astrology"! Brilliant craziness!The form appears to be a quatrain with a consistent rhyme scheme that flows smoothly when I read it aloud though the cool word arrangements could be tougue tieing.  It added to the nonsensical vibe. I felt the rhythm was not always even in each line but it did not detract from the read, meaning of entertainment value.Your use of poetic devices like alliteration, consonance and assonance makes for a lively soundscape. So many inventive ways to spend time and make me laugh at the same time. I had to look up "aspidistras" so I learned something from your poem, which is always fun! And to race them is so silly! I appreciate the effort it took to create this amazing comical poem that was entertaining and totally inventive. I admire your muse!  Light on the path as you write on!!  ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable ** "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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