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What I liked

I really struggled with my entry for "Invalid Item"  this month, so I'm impressed by what you've come up with here. It's very imaginative, and I'm impressed by the use of so many technical, cloud and atmosphere related words (like troposphere, cumulo and cirrus - the last of which was a wonderful pun, too!). I also loved the very apt references to the art of Dali and Escher. Brilliant!

What might need work

like something from a Salvador Dali dream - dream doesn't rhyme with 'seemed' but 'dreamed' does, so consider: like something that Salvador Dali dreamed. It's only a small issue which many might ignore anyhow.

Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob




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