Hi! I'm Fivesixer , and it's my pleasure to review your work today. Remember, this is only my opinion, so take whatever you'd like from it...after all, you're the author! The item I'm reviewing is "Invalid Item" .

First Impression: Hey Minja! I'm doing my judging for "Project Write World"  and I just wanted to tell you that this is a really sincere, strong statement about the differences in generations and perceptions of expectations.

What I Really Liked: I thought the entire piece was solid, and I liked the use of equations and formulas to illustrate the youth of yesterday versus the youth in the present...but damn the last two part blew me away! Especially the imagery in the beginning three lines of the last part. That's going in my mental list of "Lines I Wish I'd Written".

Spelling And Grammar: I totally understand that English isn't your first language, so I never consider grammar a factor when I read your poems. I try to imagine them in your voice when I read something of yours (I did listen to your submission for Elle's Poetry Reading forum, so I have a baseline idea). And as far as spelling, everything seems fine.

Suggestions: Suggestions? Ha! Nope, none. Keep up the excellent work...you write with a lot of emotion and passion, and it's evident. You're always a pleasure to read.

Final Thoughts: I wasn't planning on reviewing any of the items up for judging in PWW...I didn't think I'd have the time. But I couldn't resist telling you how absolutely amazing I find this. I'm so glad you entered this, and that I had the opportunity to see it. Thanks for sharing it!

Thanks for giving me the opportunity to check out your work at WDC! I hope you found this review helpful and encouraging!

Write on!
-Norb



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .