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 The Taste of Purple  [E]
A synesthete can taste what the world looks like.
by Graham Muad'dib
Review by RainbowFish
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Congrats for winning the cramp yesterday! I really enjoyed reading your entry. It was beautifully written (especially considering the time constrains) and the idea was a creative and intriguing one.

The only negative thing I had to say was that it felt a little rushed at the end. It ambled along at an enjoyable pace, and then it got to ‘"Is it Carly?" she asked.’ and I was like, woah woah woah, a complex addition to the plot with only a hundred words to go? I can’t process this. All to do with the constraints of the contest, I guess.

This was such a good story within those restrictions. I’m going to look through your port now and see what you can do when you’re set free *Smile*

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