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Hey Lostwordsmith!

Form:
Flawless adherence to distinctive and jovial limerick form. (At least as per my limited knowledge). It was easy to read, and just the sound of it made me smile. Bonus points for having 2-syllable rhymes, too – those ones are harder to think up, but so often worth it!

Punchline:
You set up this adorable image of a kitten, and set us up for some inspirational ‘dream’—and then brought it crashing down with a sly jab at the pettiness of social media fame. I enjoyed it. I wasn’t, like, rolling around in hysterics, but I did crack a grin.

Overall:
I actually picked this for first place in "Invalid Item" , but I’m not the only judge, and after some debate and negotiation you just missed out on the top prize. Well done though, and thank you so much for entering and sharing your poetry.

See you next time!
From RainbowFish


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