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Out Of Place  [18+]
A New Take On An Old Story
by Author Ed Anderson
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week. Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Well, this is a lot of things going on with this group. In the end, Sky is the "sick" one, but they all seem a bit warped in the way they treat each other, maybe with the exception of Jeff.

Jeff, although, he does the act, seems to be conflicted about the idea of hurting Maxi.

Maxi is masochistic in who she married, who her friends are and who she stays wit.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This is like Lifetime, I guess, except there is no clear hero. Well, Jeff comes closest because he has a conscience. It seems like Sky and Bryan have similar sociopathic natures, maybe that's why he didn't make a move on her. Looking in the mirror repulsed him.

There will be more trouble if Sky is on the loose. Too bad they didn't keep her locked up for the pillow thing. You have a lot going on here and it is a lot of personal drama, looking into the lives of Lifetime characters somewhat. It reminded me of poor old Brad Pitt getting dumped and kicked out to the Golden Globes.

Or, maybe the Kardashians too. Anything goes, I guess. Entertaining and somewhat alarming in the way that people treat others.

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way.

You need all sorts of reviewers for all sorts of writers. We can't all write a doctoral dissertation every time. If I did that, I'd do about six reviews a year. The point of the Writer's Cramp is to write and you do it very very well every time!

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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