Out Of Place [13+] A man watches as his reality slowly fades away...(Cramp Winner & 2017 Quill Nominee!) |
A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering! What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? This certainly seems like an overwhelming series of things that happen. Anyone would be confused by all this and want to touch base with reality. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? I like that it ends up that our protagonist decides this has to be a dream, but then is it a dream within a dream. Who knows what the answer is or if it is a dream within a dream within a dream. I enjoyed the precise timeline as a way to grasp on to what may or may not be real. Very imaginative take on the title prompt! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps Ruminating Random Thoughts I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way. You need all sorts of reviewers for all sorts of writers. We can't all write a dissertation every time. If I did that, I'd do about six reviews a year. If people don't like my reviews, I leave them a cow pie on the doorstep in my imagination. That makes me smile. Well, it is better than going into an alternate universe or so I assume. Very clever work! Rumination Termination Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"
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