This is a nice chapter of a story. There are some spelling and grammar errors that should be checked. The story is interesting. The imagination of the author comes to the fore. The characters also come alive. The story could be done better if the same tempo of story telling is maintained. The story is amusing to read. The idea of the story is to capture the imagination and does it well.
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