Hello, Steve adding writing to ntbk.

What I liked

What a fabulous tribute to your friend. I am very impressed by this emotional verse. I particularly like the picture conjured by the line: "Or swirling the little flakes in your cup of hot cocoa. " The link was very thoughtful.

What might need work

Chocoholic's anonymous calling. - did you mean, "Chocoholism's an anonymous calling"?

I recommend you put a link to Choconut ~ House Targaryen 's portfolio within your poem using the {user:purplesunday} format.

Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .