A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? You visited me recently with a nice review, so here I am visiting you and reading your poem and sending a review! What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? I think that we take a lot for granted with regard to earth because it is always there. It is a lot like our parents in that sense. This is a lovely whimsical children's poem of appreciation. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? This was my favorite part: "With a single stride catch shooting stars and zoom to Mars. Or hear a timid lion bellow a roar through heaven's door." It's all tied in together here. It is the way I think my mind worked as a child. It would be natural to see the lion at the door or the shooting stars with regard to Mars. It's a lovely life we all lead here on Planet Earth, isn't it? Well done! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps Ruminating Random Thoughts I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way. You need all sorts of reviewers for all sorts of writers. We can't all write a doctoral dissertation every time. If I did that, I'd do about six reviews a year. Besides that, I've seen some lengthy diatribes that were flat out wrong. Length and self confidence does not always equal meritorious advice, most especially on the Internet. Rumination Termination Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"
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