A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! What brought hooves or the Hand of THiNG to your port? I gave the prompt for this in "The Writer's Cramp" earlier this week and was curious to read and see what you did with it! What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item? I like that you drew the comparison to Lizzie Borden and her way of getting even. The title was clever, too! What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item? This was my favorite part: "Life has more gifts than reason, in missing points found and made. Humility is always in season where anger may be the point waylaid." When gift points go missing from causes, it is usually someone has pocketed them to self upgrade or something heinous of that nature. LoL. Certainly not a life and death matter, is it? Well, it could be considered embezzlement, but whatever. It is best not to go overboard when thinking about it. Nice work, with a fine parallel drawn! Congrats on another superlative effort! THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps SometHiNg I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you! END OF SometHiNg Ta Ta until we meet again.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"
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