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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Dragon is hiding

What I liked

What a wonderful concept. You've gotta love this! Such wonderful Trinkets too and a very colourful page. Love it! *Heart*

What might need work

One small point. It's not 新年快乐 it's 春节快乐 because 新年 is the new calendar year, whereas 春节 is spring-festival, ie. what we call the Chinese New Year. While you can say 新年快乐 to Chinese folk during the Spring Festival and they'll understand you, they'll also think you're a strange 洋鬼子 *Laugh*

You may also wish to mention that this 春节 witnesses the birth of the Year of the Rooster (鸡). At the moment you only mention that it's the Chinese New Year, not that it's the Year of the Rooster.

I note that you use modern simplified Chinese characters for your text and so have used the same in this review, though there's nothing to stop you using traditional, more complex characters, ie. 春節快樂!

Hope these points help. Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob *BigSmile*

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