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 Bonsai  [E]
1st Place Weekly Haiku Contest, 10-26-08
by Rixfarmgirl
Review of Bonsai  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Your syllable count was right on, and I'm not sure if I've ever seen a two stanza Haiku.

You sure are clever to get the format to also fit the other format of first letters spelling the type of tree. Good for you.

You were even able to put in about how to make the Bonsai tree. I loved it.
Thanks for sharing
love, LinnAnn
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