Wow, you had a fun family. Your beach trips sound wonderful.

You may want to add a possessive apostrophe to show dad's ownership in the first verse.

'Motor wipers', is that the same as windshield wipers?

Holes in the floor...I don't think I'd be dumping out the sweets, but it does rhyme. lol

'Chalk and cheese' was that the color of your hair? White and yellow. Was 'fringe' your hair?

I was a dainty tomboy, so understood that verse. roflol

Your 'shooting drivers' I'm not sure I got that. Did you have a BB gun and actually shoot peoples rear ends? If that is what you meant, you might want to consider 'drivers behinds' and make it plural.

I didn't get the pinches and pokes making drivers have eyes?

I think you meant 'sweat stained' instead of 'sweet stained'.

I loved how you used 'snaps' to rhyme. Good job.

Were 'Sooty and Sweep' teddy bears you owned or were they characters from a book?

What is a 'sarnie'? What is 'salt and shake'?

I loved the 'fly with those dragons'. I have a couple of dragon books I'm working on, and comparing them works so well.

You did well on your rhyming.

I do hope you take the time to answer my questions. Where in the UK are you from?
Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn