The title is perfect for the theme and I like the contrast of Sweet with the darker vibe of Revenge. The essence of the revenge is original and I did have to smile as I imagined the speaker's snarky grin thinking of the deception! Brilliant concept.

The poem looks free style yet it has an appealing triangle shape and it is cool how you have increasing and descreasing line lengths and have it flow coherently. The lines are balanced and meet in the middle with the longest line. Is there a name for the form. I can appreciate the effort it takes to get that right.

I like the word "magic" and the contrast to "suffer". You do the light and dark chemistry well. I wondered if there was something more potent for "it feels good"? I do see it has to fit with your syllables though.

I had fun reading this poem and entering into your vision.

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