Oh wow! I am so happy this piece came up as I am always interested in learning more about poetry. This article is very enlightening about Metaphors and your experience with them.

I like the simplicity of your explanation and how you use the example of the Christmas tree to illustrate your point. I appreciate you sharing your faux-pas with using them and the tips you have learned. I had totally forgotten the definition--it really does tell you alot!

The article flows in a coherent manner and sticks to the topic exclusively. I like how you added the term "collusion", a term I had heard before as well. Nice to be reminded.
The example of Pinsky was marvelous. Wow. He said that whole line in a few words! Amazing. Good choice. I appreciated Jane Yolen's story too and had to smile! You did a good job adding entertaining qualities to the article.

The voice is humble and keeps the narrative active and personal in tone. It includes both author and reader. The page is easy to read and follow and I was not thrown out by glaring glitches! I had a good time reading this.

Thanks for sharing your knowledge as a contribution to WDC. I learn from you.

You responded to this review 01/15/2017 @ 11:59am EST

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