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Review #4292066
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 I Want Them Out!  [E]
Something is wrong with Arthur's knee.
by Espero
Review of I Want Them Out!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp. Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I cannot consider your story for the Writer's Cramp because the rules require that you post your word count IN the contest forum. I am very sorry to write that, but I can offer you my compliments on writing a fine story and my humble thoughts.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I like how you portray the doctor and wife as being skeptics. Alfred or Arthur (I think it is Arthur, right, although the item description says it is Arthur, in the story it starts out being Alfred) is adamant about what he is experiencing.

I think this is a clever portrayal of what one goes through in pioneering the description of a medical experience to nay sayers. Usually physicians won't admit anything has anything to do with what they did. They're all afraid of liability and being sued.

I thought your story was very well written and thought out.

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way.

You need all sorts of reviewers for all sorts of writers. We can't all write a doctoral level dissertation every time. If I did that, I'd do about six reviews a year, and I wouldn't enjoy it. We all should enjoy ourselves here because we are volunteers in what we are doing.

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