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 Love, Lies and Deceptions  [E]
This is just a random poem that I put together. I'm not a poet, guys.
by TheWalkerInMe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You wrote a poem, so yes, you ARE a poet now. lol

It might read a little bit easier if there were a couple of blank lines in there, or even one such as separating the way he treats you and where you describe what she did to him. It's just something to think about after all YOU are the poet. (giggle)

Thought provoking and held my interest.

Nicely done and I like the question at the end.
Thanks so much for sharing.
love, LinnAnn
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