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Given: Jan 16, 2017 at 9:57pm
Length: 450 Characters |
445 w/o WritingML
You wrote a poem, so yes, you ARE a poet now. lol
It might read a little bit easier if there were a couple of blank lines in there, or even one such as separating the way he treats you and where you describe what she did to him. It's just something to think about after all YOU are the poet. (giggle)
Thought provoking and held my interest.
Nicely done and I like the question at the end.
Thanks so much for sharing.
love, LinnAnn
You responded to this review 01/17/2017 @ 10:29am EST
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