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Given: Jan 17, 2017 at 8:12am
Length: 838 Characters |
686 w/o WritingML
Hello Sally,
I enjoyed reading your story. I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore.
That was a little but a thought provoking story. Pets do have a powerful relationship with their owners and they cannot be replaced, leave alone returned.
The story was good to read and I was a little surprised as it ended s quickly. May be you should turn it into a novel. You did mention about your other pets. Who were they and what happened to them? What happens to Misty? There are many places to explore in this story.
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