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A Homeless Holiday  [E]
preserved in Hymnal Measure.
by Dave
Review by the Wordy Jay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Dave!

I am the Wordy Jay and I'm here to celebrate YOU -- my fellow Power Reviewer -- with a review! (What else?!) *Bigsmile*

Ahem, I know that today isn't your "official day" but better late than never, right? *Wink*



I really enjoyed your poem about the plight of the homeless during the holidays. You captured both the sights and emotions of forgotten servicemen and women in a beautiful way -- showcasing the reality of their situation, yet still affording them plenty of dignity. *ThumbsUpL*

Oh wow, your diction/vocabulary is awesome! I actually had to look up a few words to find out what they mean! *Laugh*

Well, I have absolutely no idea what Hymnal Measure is, so I won't be making any comments on the poetry form. I think it flows well though.

Suffice to say, I'm impressed!



Write on!

Jay



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