Creeping Silence [18+] Fear will consume you. |
A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thanks for entering and I see you are new, so I want to moo a warm welcome to the site to you! What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? You set the scene for some creepy things. I like the atmosphere you create and the tension that it evokes in the reader. I was wondering what would happen next at every turn. He sure seems brave, at first, in confronting whatever lays outside. I like your title too, as it builds up the suspense over what might transpire as he leaves the apparent safety of the house to investigate the situation. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? I especially like that early on you tell the reader that Buck has some issues in what he sees. It left me wondering if all the violence came from him, since he seems so desperately unhappy and determined to make things right. The delusional aspect is quite interesting to contemplate. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps Ruminating Random Thoughts I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way. You need all sorts of reviewers for all sorts of writers. We can't all write a dissertation every time. If I did that, I'd do about six reviews a year. I give you my reactions and I do what I enjoy. That seems to work out well as a rule. Rumination Termination Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"
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