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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This was hilarious. I will get to the hilarious part in a minute.

It didn't bother me, but you changed your female half of the equation's name from Victoria (the prompt) to Martha (my favorite) and then to Diana. I liked her as Martha best. I am not going to be a stickler for sticking to the prompt name as I am feeling festive at the moment. Also, I see that you edited mid morning so I think you might have taken Diana out of the mix. It didn't confuse me, but in future edits you might want to figure out which name you want it to be so as not to boggle the mind of your readers too much. Other judges might look at things differently, if you get my drift.

You made me laugh and that was the bottom line for me and it usually is.

Also a word to the wise is that sometimes I read real early and then don't forget to check so editing late might not be seen by me or it might be. So, say I am on here at 9 am writing.com time and I read and I might not see the changes you make at 10. The aim is mostly to get that new prompt up so you have time to write for it.

Well, just giving you a heads up on the process in my barn. Great work here, as always my friend!

I knew who you meant each time you referred to her, she who must be served, the boss of the house. *Laugh* And jolly well, she should be!

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

Calling Animal Control for help made me howl with laughter.

That was hilarious and not far from a real experience.

I loved this:

"We have bears under our porch.” I tried to keep it simple.

“Bears? That would be animal control. I’ll transfer you. Please hold.” Some light elevator music took her place on the phone. "

I once had a bat in my house and I went through something similar. Nothing rattles people who make their money from city government service. LoL They are far removed and protected from us in the masses.

All's well that ends well.

Jack was true to life, wasn't he? I mean, the bear isn't in his house, is it, rotten tosser Jack.

ROFLOL

Great story, as always!

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way.

You need all sorts of reviewers for all sorts of writers. We can't all write a dissertation every time. If I did that, I'd do about six reviews a year.

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