"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  10th Anniversary Year

Member-to-Member Honour Review

Hi Captain Taryn!

I am the Wordy Jay and I'm here to celebrate YOU -- my fellow Power Reviewer -- with a review! (What else?!)

Ahem, I know that today isn't your "official day" but better late than never, right?


This "break-up" poem with Mr. Writer's Block is really creative! Your first line "it’s not you but me…" made me chuckle from the start.

The flow is generally ok and there's no rhyming scheme, seeing that the poem is in free verse, but I feel that the rhythm can be improved. Perhaps you might want to look into that area.


Here are some suggestions that might be helpful:

The hold you had on me, I never knew.
But that time is over,
in time you will realize what I say is true.


What I could possibly have seen in you, I never knew.
But that spell is broken
in time you will realize what I say is true.


Well, that's just my 2 cents' worth! Feel free to do whatever you wish with my suggestions -- whether it is to adopt them, discard them, or anything in between!

A review courtesy of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 





My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .