Hi, Jay! I'm not sure it's fair reviewing this for I Write instead of for my contest. I am getting a look at your entry before the others. But, that is the nature of this event. I mean I am getting to tell you ahead of time that you didn't use any F's so that is a plus. However, I gave this four stars because I'm not sure it qualifies as Fantasy. I still haven't made up my mind. It is a cute poem and idea. I can see it working very well as a children's poem. I'm just not sure that is the same as fantasy. Lucky for me I don't have to make that distinction alone. My co-judge can give her opinion on that and since I can't make up my mind we will go with what she thinks.

The poem itself is very well written. Thank you for entering, and know I did enjoy it even if It isn't coming across that way.

Please keep writing!
Becca



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