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To the one I love  [E]
Playing with sonnet and anaphora, with lots of love in heart
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Very nicely done! I learned something new with this style. I hope I can remember it. lol The repetition was great, not over done, and your rhyming at the end of the lines was also well done.

I love the last line the best. "You are my shore." How many people can say that anymore?
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
love, LinnAnn
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