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 A Dog's Day (an sevenling anaphora)  [E]
My attempt at a sevenling anaphora.
by Dorianne
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I'm so glad you added the explanation at the end. lol My head wasn't thinking dog and playing fetch. My head was driving up in the car at a stadium. Picturing kids waiting for permission to get out of the car to go in.

Crowds cheering when the ball flies up. I'm picturing a great catch in the outfield or a home run. lol The family all proud and happy their team won. Sooooo different than what you meant. giggle
Thanks for sharing. Great imagery both ways. lol
love, LinnAnn
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