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Tell Not A Soul.  [E]
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by Sunny
Review of Tell Not A Soul.  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Sunny, I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group
I am reviewing you because your are being highlighted today as a valuable member of the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group though all members are valuable, you have shown yourself to go above and beyond the call of duty and we thank you. This poem was well written and I thought it was very heartfelt, which I liked. but it kind of threw me being written in the second person POV. It felt like it should have been written in first person. But that's just my opinion others may feel differently about it.
nonetheless it is well written and you did a superb job creating it.
Thank you for sharing and God Bless you

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