This is a very well-written and emotional piece. I loved the rhyme scheme and the repeated line--it worked very well for your topic to emphasize the line about tears repeatedly. It gave the image of a person crying multiple tears as they think through the lines of the poem. Also, great job keeping up the same rhyme scheme throughout--you found so many different words to express your ideas, although the rhyme scheme didn't jump out at me as I read it. I was caught up in the meaning of the text, not the rhyme, and that's what any good poetry should do. Awesome job!

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