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 Gaston and Yvonne  [E]
An entry for January's "Write Me a Lipogram" contest
by AlyCatAuthor HAPPY 4th!
Review of Gaston and Yvonne  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Dear Aly Cat

This poem had me smile. I liked your use of rhyme and the image of a falling down Gaston. What I didn't understand was the part about the girl glowing in her chamber? Is she not human? Why is she glowing? I didn't understand the ending either.

Good luck in the contest!

Miss Mary

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