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Hello ember_rain, I am reviewing this story for "I Write in December-January-February" .

My First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Little Dove crying. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

My Favorite Part: I like the way the descriptions were made part of the action.

My Final Thoughts and/or Suggestions: Check the link at the bottom of the story because it does not work.

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