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*heatrt*This is such a lovely tribute to the many years of life with your beloved husband. I am so sorry that he is no longer with you, as God has called him home. However, your memories of life together are beautiful. You two really had something special.

Observations:

"At the flicks we cuddled and cued"
I think you meant cooed in this line, which means "To talk fondly or amorously in murmurs."

"Valentine were very special times"
As it stands, the grammar is a little off. Valentines were special times, would work better, but it doesn't quite describe it. Valentine's Days always special times, perhaps would be better, though not perfect in rhythm.

came the day we chose a ring, andit cost a few dime[s]"

"A year had past [passed] and came two tiny feet"

"Now there's not no room they have to sit on the floor"


This was such a beautiful tribute. With a little edit here and there, it will polish up nicely.

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