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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello there, Marti
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Home*


*Cool*Welcome back to WDC. Have no fear, the muse will get you there. It's good to see you are anxious to get back to writing again. It's also true that long absences, although they do make the heart grow fonder, make it feel a little daunting when we try getting pen to paper and placing a new item up for review. *Delight* But you did it!!!

*Quill* Your poem succinctly states the feelings of doubt about picking up where a writer leaves off, after being away for a while. You do a lovely job keeping the rhyme, the rhythm is not perfection -- but it's a start. *Smile*

Your poem lets the reader feel the emotions of starting over again. The best thing about it is that when time passes by, thoughts and muses can grow in a direction not imagined before. The possibilities are endless. *Fire*

Observation:

"I might as well stayed in bed" [Stay or have stayed]

Again, it's good to see you back in the WDC hood! All the best in your return to writing. *Tophat*


Until next time--write on!

Regards.
WebWitch *Witch*


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