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Hello there, eyestar~*
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Owl1*


*Ladybug* You know, this was such a sweet reminiscence of a couple as they spent the years together, from early on through thirty plus years of love. It wasn't just love, though, it was more of an ongoing romance that had a common thread throughout the lines of your prose-like poem.

*TulipR* It told a story and it was a wonderful story. The reader could picture the couple and their undying love through the years.

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"She loved the diner drama they [shared?] every year" There is a missing word that begs filling-in. *Wink*

*PaintBrush* This was such a sweet, romantic read. I enjoyed the early days at the Diner and on the Harley, all the way until the thirty-three years of a beautiful love as it unfolded through the years.

Lovely, and filled with realistic images for the reader to take with her long after she's left the page. *DragonflyP*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*



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