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 Get Help!  [13+]
A situation becomes too much for a pair of siblings.
by 💙 Carly
Review of Get Help!  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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Dear Carly,
What a great beginning you have for a longer story! It pulled me in from the beginning. Good use of the prompt words. I know this was for a contest entry with a limited amount of words, but I think you could have expanded it and made it longer. Instead, we don't know what happens next. It is more like a part of a story instead of a complete one.

Good luck in the contest.

Miss Mary

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