This is a nice poem about the potential of newborns to become future beauties. The rhyming is in place, but the poetry has a touch of prose to it. It could be more like a poem and less like assertive statements. The poetry has to flow. The idea of newborn babies is nice and introduces the reader to a world perhaps unseen by them. Mother's can see the beauty in babies, this is very true. The hope of a newborn turning beautiful is also brought out in the poetry.
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