This poetry is good to read. It's native American theme is refreshing and makes us feel lighter. The Archimedes form is introduced to the reader. The reference to pine, sage and generations of ritual makes us connect to native Indian forms of worship and use of articles. The Eagle and the Wolf are referred as brothers. This is again a native American idea of using family roles for animals. The poetry makes us connect with nature and native American life. It is a good effort at writing good poetry with good form, inspiring content and right use of good words.