A melodious little poem you have here.
Imagery pops and fills your 3 lines with life.
Emotionally there is "love" singing it's melody to his/her beloved.
The flow is as smooth as a flawless waltz.
The pace is slow and sensually loaded.
There is no evidence of grammatical snafu's along the way, making this a top 10 piece in anybody's books.
Would not recommend you change a thing, because you have said it all in your remarkable piece.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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