Your poem tells a story.
One with a beginning, middle, and an end.
Emotionally there is concern for a loved one in the ravages of war. The reader can feel that and identifies with it. Keeping him in the story and not straying to the right or the left.
The unique form and structure are not a distraction, they lend a sense of the uncertainty of those who are at war and those who are waiting for their return.
The flow is smooth and easy to follow.
The pace is slow and sensory impact-ful.
The absence of grammatical snafu's along the way is evidence of your attention to details.
Thanks for sharing in the WdC and write on!
Copenator out!
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