I love it when writers block is so expressively depicted.
You speak to the hearts and minds of every author who has faced that blank paper, and blank mind.
Your form and structure are adequate.
The flow is as smooth as a word pouring out onto the page.
The pace is slow and steady on, as the reader inhales the aroma of the paper and pen that are making the creation you so finely display here. That's your imagery that evoked this description.
Grammatically speaking there is no evidence of a jot nor tittle that has gone awry.
Write on!
Copenator out!
** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .