Imagery in this piece is outstanding!
The reader is entrenched in the tale and marvels at the wordy palette you do create.
The flow is so smooth and sensory filled that the reader get's lost in the piece and lingers from line to line.
The pace is slow and steady on as you finish the artistry in the sky and hint and the future story found in the garden.
If one could use but one word to describe this piece it would be "boom"! It's that good and worthy of all praise it may receive.
Grammatically speaking you have a clean as a whistle palette from which to ply your wordy wares.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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