I often marvel at how complete the stories are the come out of poetry.
It's a "novella" in a small number of lines.
Here the reader is touched by the emotion of hopelessness, as the "princess" awaits her eventual demise, for her Savior isn't coming to be sure.
Form and structure is well suited to this poem.
The flow is smooth and that keeps the reader focused on the tale unfolding through your lines.
The pace is slow and steady on, loaded with tidbits that assure the reader does not get bored and move on. Grammatically you have a clean, crisp piece and thank you for sharing in the WdC!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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