Your words are not lost anew.
As you proceed from stanza to stanza the reader can see the progression of a complete scenario.
The emotional tags, float to the surface and taunt the reader to continue on in the tale.
The flow is smooth, and one would say this is almost a melody that can be sung by one who knows how to do that.
The pace is slow and sensory filled,
and grammatically you have an ace high straight story fulfilled.
No suggestions for improvement are needed in this piece, as it's all there for each reader to absorb and applaud in the end. Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Write on!
Copenator out!
** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .