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| (4.5)  Hiya Dollardays! Look what popped up on Read and Review!  I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!   Wow! I think I tried this Tweet me contest once. It is more challenging than one thinks to make a story in less than 140 characters and catch attention and a little aha!  Your title gives a clue to the essence of the expression. Brilliant! The story has enough detail and elements to clue us into the crime. I enjoyed the evocative nature of the piece and what it does not specify. It draws the reader to his own conclusions: like perhaps father/ daughter did not get along because either she was a problem or he was a problem. I can fill in my own story.  You give a clue to setting in a vivid image. I can imagine them up at a cottage at a lake, in a wealthy cabin! Though adverbs are not so descriptive, in this case the adverb adds to the drama with a pause and expectation, and suits as you can only use a few characters to explain this concept.  Thanks for sharing this tweet. I enjoyed entering the dark vision.  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/10/2017 @ 7:10pm EST