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| (4.5)  Welcome to WDC DHiman! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!   Wow! I so admire your crafting here! Your metaphor and image is so vivid and the tone rather sad! Your contrast of the innocent highflying bird in joy to the fall is potent.  The two line verses and the connective enjambments are so effective in the dramatic scenario and I was drawn to read til the end. Beautiful expression! You might like to enter "Invalid Item" .  You can check into other contests if you go to the Community tab on the left side of the page under Contests.  Thanks for sharing this heartfelt expression. I really could enter into the vision with its deep undercurrents and commentary! Wow!  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable ** "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Like dragons: "DreamTime Dragon's Poem Contest"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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