I found this poem on the Read a Newbie, page.

I could feel the emotions that went into writing this tribute to your beloved, feathered friend. Friend being the key word, because when you love a pet, there is a bond shared between the two that only they understand. It is knowing when the other is feeling not too well, and responds in the only way understood to a human -- songs and notes that lift the spirit.

How sad that the last note was actually his parting song -- a farewell to one who loved him dearly.

Your poem doesn't appear to have any particular rhyming form, giving it a free verse feel. It is also a prose-type poem, telling a story in a casual way, but still showing the emotional attachment.

Observations:

I believe the poem could be structured a little tighter or else have more punctuation added where needed, to show emphasis and to let the reader know when to pause.

"It was their [there]
in his cage that he played his last song."

You responded to this review 02/15/2017 @ 8:09pm EST

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