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Hello Survivor48

This is a thought provoking little poem about trying to keep the sunshine alive within us on cloudy days. I like how you've mixed it up with this poem with 3 line stanzas rather than your usual couplets. You still maintain the flow of words with clarity and a good pace. Great job with this.

Best wishes,
Mark


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